About
About
About
English with Dr Sophie Breese
Online English tutoring for 11+ and upwards

Enrichment & Creative Writing
Enrichment
English lessons shouldn't just be about examination preparation and I am delighted to say that I still do enrichment lessons with students I worked with for the 11 plus exams. This April (2025), I am doing Anglo-Saxon poetry with a Year 10 student at North London Collegiate (we have just finished 'The World's Wife' by Carol Ann Duffy); 'The Knight's Tale'; by Chaucer (in the original) with a Year 6 student about to go to St Paul's; 'Much Ado About Nothing' with another Year 6 student about to go to SPGS; Shakespeare's sonnets with a Year 6 student about to go to Godolphin; 'An Inspector Calls' by Priestley with 2 different students in Year 8 both at SPGS. All of these students worked with me during their 11+ preparation and it is so exciting being able to do the fun stuff with them now. I absolutely love the fact that I am sharing Middle English poetry with a 10 year old student and that she is getting such pleasure from finding that she can understand most of it.
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Creative Writing
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Encouraging young people to write creatively is central to my teaching ethos. You can't fully understand a writer's choices, until you think about your own (and vice versa). I weave creative writing into all my lessons whether 11+ prep, A level, or general enrichment, and I insist that all my students enter competitions to motivate them into writing. Students I have worked with have won or been commended for the following competitions: the Tower Poetry Prize, the H. G. Wells Short Story Competition, Author of Tomorrow, the Young Walter Scott Prize, and in 2024 alone the Foyle Young Poets, the Martha Mills Young Writer's Prize, the Daunt Books' Short Story Competition, the Elmbridge Literary Competition, the Solstice Prize and the Henrietta Branford Writing Competition. This year I volunteered to a be a judge of the BBC 500 Words competition.
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I am currently doing enrichment with a Year 6 student called Chloe. At the moment we are studying 'The Yellow Wallpaper' and doing lots of creative writing. I am delighted to say that she has been a runner-up or commended in the following competitions in 2024 alone: Daunt Books, the Elmbridge Literary Competition, Solstice National Young Nature Writing Prize; Foyle's Young Poet of the Year; and was one of only 12 runners up in the second year of the Martha Mills Young Writers' Prize 2024 - it was judged by Philip Pullman and she was the youngest by far of the winners! Chloe and her parents have kindly allowed me to share her beautiful story, 'Therapy Cat' which has been published in an anthology for the Martha Mills competition.
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At St Paul's Girls' School, I was selected by the Poetry Society to be a Teacher Trailblazer in recognition of my creative writing teaching and the fact that so many of my students won competitions. See Sophie's poem below for an example of a winning poem from the time I worked at SPGS. A number of attendees of the SPGS Creative Writing Group have gone onto become published authors. Look at Lucy Webster's ground-breaking memoir 'The View from Down Here', Isabella Hammad's beautiful novels including her most recent 'Enter Ghost' which was short-listed for the Women's Prize for Fiction, Imogen West-Knight's funny and disturbing novel, 'Deep Down', and Ankita Saxena's stunning collection of poems, 'Mother/Line'.
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Sophie has taught both my sons over the last 8 years initially so that they could pass the 11+ exam and then subsequently because they enjoyed her teaching so much. Even during the stresses of exam preparation Sophie was a sweet and encouraging presence hilst remaining rigorous and thorough and, importantly, successful! The fact is that she is an excellent and inspiring teacher: after the exams my youngest son asked to continue the tuition because he enjoyed the range of writing and reading that Sophie brought to the lessons. Sophie loves her subject and this passion has been incredibly beneficial for both my sons' appreciation of literature and the skill with which they are able to use the English language.
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Parent of boys. I worked with the family for 9 years, 11+ for both boys, enrichment for the younger, then home-schooling him to 9s in both English GCSEs, A level support, Oxbridge, 2022. He is now at Cambridge reading English.
I worked with Sophie at St Paul's when she was the leading teacher for Creative Writing. It's no exaggeration to say that she is one of the most inspiring colleagues and teachers I have encountered. Why? She is full of ideas and energy; if I was ever looking for inspiration or an exciting way of approaching fairly dry exam-related material then it is to her I would turn. I certainly have Sophie to thank for the confidence I now feel in delivering lessons on all aspects of creative writing. Sophie loves talking about literature and exudes passion from every pore - this makes her such good company in the classroom and the staff room. A literary priestess to her students, I should confess to holding her in similar seraphic regard!
Former colleague from the English Department at St Paul's Girls' School
​Whale Song
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I boom-mumble I bass-blow
I hull-heavy I big/slow
I boat-bump I limpet-skin
I soft-sink I sky-swim
I sea-search I salt-swallow
I bone-backed I fluke-follow
I gulf-cross I listen-talk
I moon-map I wave-walk
I tail-turn I time-keep
I ship-wreck I song-seek
I blue-blood I grumble-sing
I fish-heart I dream king
Sophie Stephenson-Wright
Sophie Stephenson-Wright was one of my students. She came to the Creative Writing Group at St Paul's Girls' School which I ran for 5 years. Here Sophie discovered she particularly liked writing about the natural world. She was one of the Poetry Society's Foyle Young Poets of the Year winners in 2008 along with fellow former student Emma Jourdan; she was one of three highly commended poets for the Tower Poetry Competition in 2009 along with Emma Jourdan and another former student Beth Aitman; she won the BBC Wildlife of Year Young Poet competition in 2008; and in 2010 she was chosen by Poems on the Underground to represent emerging young talent with this extraordinary poem, 'Whale Song'. In 2016, this poem was included in The Emma Press Anthology of The Sea edited by Eve Lacey.